LawProse Lessons #73 & #74

LawProse Lessons #73 & #74

Lesson # 73
What is the biggest mistake that lawyers make in the writing process? ANSWER: Starting to write before they’ve figured out precisely what the message is. As a result, the writing tends to be long-winded, meandering, repetitious, and unfocused. For tips on adopting a sensible method for writing, see these sources: Garner on Language and Writing 3-11 (2009). Legal Writing in Plain English 3-6 (2001). Scalia & Garner, Making Your Case 66-67, 69-80 (2008). The Winning Brief 3-42 (2d ed. 2004). Or take the one-hour LawProse webinar: “The Writing Process” (available at
Lesson # 74
Can a single complimentary close work for all of a lawyer’s correspondence? Is it correct to use “Sincerely”? ANSWER: Yes, “Sincerely” is quite correct — and perhaps the most usual. But it is ill-advised to use a single complimentary close for all letters. Here is a brief spectrum of choices: Sincerely (yours), Respectfully (yours), Very respectfully (yours), Very truly yours, Yours very truly, Yours truly, Yours sincerely, See: The Elements of Legal Style 97-98 (2d ed. 2002). The Redbook: A Manual on Legal Style 328-29 (2d ed. 2006). Or take the one-hour LawProse webinar “Superb Legal Correspondence” (available at
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