LawProse Lesson #116
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Hi Bryan-
I’m a recent fan of your lessons. I print them out and we discuss them at the family dinner table, much to the chagrin of my teenagers. I hear mutterings about what constitutes “normal dinner conversation,” but my wife (a fellow grammar Nazi), at least, participates with enthusiasm.
My 17 year-old daughter, Molly, did comment on this lesson, observing that your use of the of-genitive to solve this particular problem is used carte blanche in Spanish. She coined the phrase “going Spanish” to describe applying a lazy Band-Aid to a thorny grammatical problem. Your Lesson #115 example came to mind, when using “attorney fees” “presumably to avoid making a decision . . . altogether.” She wonders if there is a cultural link between the of-genitive practice and their daily afternoon siesta. I prefer not to judge.
Keep up the good work.
-Bob